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Deontae Dansby
Adrienne Oliver
Creative writing
May 9, 2021
Stories are better it's true plus the proof that I become better to be able to make stories up are they made from the truth I like to right going somewhere is what my stories let you know you might find some of the readings interesting it's always somewhere to go for a person to make stories up it feels like being a artist when drawing is the filling of coming up with a adventure for some stories being creative is not that hard but you can with your mind to come up with some wonderful stories for people to read if a person take time to write the stories I make I like that I would share them they will be on adventure to a happy ending for people with names are I involved myself to make it interesting everything I mentioned about myself maybe the truth maybe information to help the new reason why I said what I said I work hard at my work to make it good enough to read you maybe seem are heard before I think make me a good writer to me it's what it prove. The helping
writing is doing I'm writing for a reason to prove through a assignment that so far I have done great this works for me reading and writing will explain my answer I have become good and I like to read and write I will show I do know how this is true. The main reason I'm because I need to improve with writing stories so I write from a theme. The writing is creative it is good now I am learning the process will help me be a better writer I like to write to prove I got better I am writing to be good at school this that writing this will prove. The stories will be a part of a assignment aspect to read stories some writing
explaining now I want to complete this course but it seems good to read like closer to a writing summary that help a person get to understand I am doing good so far and I believe my writing will improve. That's what I am trying to prove.
Stories they helping now when a person reading all my stories I will try to write enough to understand. Reason all able to make sense stories the truth is hard so some is made up I made characters to understand on a adventure to get somewhere are they were at a building in a neighborhood in the community in the city where a lot could happen but I have made stories. In the jungle are they will walk along a path to over river. End up in another city where they will like people they met that help them get there by letting them know how to get there they can get lost but they make it to where started to go they do not turn around to go back home they have they path in the jungle. Anybody wasn't cool with it they had rights. Opportunity to read the writing I created is coming the stories seem short stories reading if it is something to read that make me want to read every other reading from day to night. Meaning is telling explaining stories how I do my stories based on "relationships" how people can make it survival because they will survive with each other in stories I made nothing happen to the characters they all have a destination told happy ending like it was night and they made it to the lights.
Now you can like stories with people being with each other relationship and the people have know problems with the environment living in the community they are in the right area in a workplace with each other the time is the best until it is over. Other people can be around these people and notice they continue to do what they can do in the stories I write will be helping you understand what characters I made a past of the stories are make it to and how they are keeping the way to end to be happy readers read how a happy ending is what my stories prove. Reason was to show how to men are tryna get somewhere it seem like to people saving money is the reason friends will get along with each other working landscape job to save to have strength. Some money make people get along two people going to work is one of my stories. This writing will continue to explain than some stories.
Do right when I prove my work is right I have my name involved when I make a Artist statement I like what I done. Ended up explaining my information on a assignment you see it is a part of my portfolio you can read my biography is one of my papers with writing explains. Finding the river is my favorite. Going to a new town in a story is great. Happiness is explained when the get to the they will be happy because they was on a long walk through the tree area's to get to they destination a lot could have happened like getting hurt and not having the right healthcare. Interesting stories after you read some of what they could be important to help my skills seem incredible.
During the interviews that's a part of the feedback letter I was reading my work it was good to do the writing workshop with someone the experience was a good decision for development. Greatest effort to try to make a portfolio I hope that readers enjoy reading mind I'm grateful. Journey is what one of my stories have to some people on a journey and I think it was good now I'm writing on judgement. Maintaining the good work after I wrote the power of I am I thought of golden gate that brings back memories. Prepared to read other people work again if it will help with work I have provided. Something I learned this semester is creative writing and I tried to help understand specifically.
Deontae Dansby
Creative writing
May 5, 2021
Response
In the neighborhood where you can have a home. At a area is where the "messages" is learned at in a community. My effort show somebody again got easy story. The African American males learned each other talk to Jay was Tom money main reason Jay and Tom are really outside. They both work at the same place and work outside they are "responsible" for tools they job has for them to use the job Jay and Tom job they do is called landscape Job they clean up helping the city they both like the truth told. Locations is at where they living "arrangement" is at home where they both work at the landscape Job they want hundreds, thousands, and millions of dollars they both agree to having lots of money around in this community has clean environment these are good people that lives in the city they work in they make lots of money they Jay and Tom both of them are lucky.
Messages are learned by Jay and Tom it is about money so they participate to get money they see how to make it to get some money they both enjoy getting money, that's right. Responsible for Jay and Tom is they get to work on time everyday they have to go Jay and Tom stay right next to each other in the same building they both make sure that Job is done and everything is clean right. Arrangement is the reason they both like messages and are responsible like media communication they understand set up to live around each other to go to the same job and they both make sure they keep how they have it in the same building and at the same workplace into the job end.
Deontae Dansby
Creative writing
May. 5, 2021
The Adventure
This same adventure that is the adventure Jimmy, was to follow the path to a new city to get to a new place to live his friends Joe, and Fred, was coming with him through the woods up a mountain and down a mountain to get to where his family lives in the city next to where he use to live he has to walk there so he has started to noticed how to get there the stuff he can run into are animals he can see is important to this story. The help people probably believe into get to east river the trees really are big trees they "tall" trees they will be everywhere in this "adventure" is what going through the woods proves. The walk is a long walk got to have enough food supplies with enough drink people is ready on this way to get there they would won't to try not to get surrounded by animals that will hurt them in the woods where they will not have a doctor at to get to for recovery they plan to stay close to be safe as possible every person have their rights. Added a mask to cover face they will be around trees bugs are in the woods a lot they are wearing hats to cover they heads dress the best they could for this adventure they have a lot to learn they could have could video tape the time while on the adventure this the only way to walk there the "destination" is what really is right they could go in the way but the right way walk is the way they are going so Jimmy, Joe, and Fred has a way to go to east river this their first adventure. Across the river is the what they will have to do they are not "afraid" to cross into the city that has the destination the good thing about them being friends is that they have nothing "against" each other they understand each other "appearance" they are all ready for the experiences they run into they know it amazing that they have all the stuff on this path to take to learn about this way to go to get together with family for "attention" they will get there altogether. In the end they have each other still alright as survivors they made it was going to be hard not to ones they got to the river can see the city from there so it's a way to from there after they have lots of bigger and better buildings they really tall buildings they really wanted to get there Jimmy, Joe, and Fred the whole time there they wanted everybody not to have any problems are any issues.
Tall trees big buildings all coming to see on the adventure they have the right way to east river everytime now that's right. Adventure is what they got of it Jimmy, Joe, and Fred. Afraid they was not they wasn't scared at all on the path to get there that was one of the good things. Against the woods they were walking to they did not stop. Appearance was the same after they got there to east river. Attention they got lots of it when they all there that's the end of the story.
Deontae Dansby
Creative writing
April 5, 2021
Midterm
My first assignment was good to read after I tried to use my new writing skills. Because I tried my best to use what I can come up with I thought of ways to make it to the next would be created writing but it was a way to become smart to know real way to create writing my self then I came back to revise and put the new kind of writing will be great. My plan is to make the letters than words be times Roman to have some new kind of writing appear is now what using to help with created writing skills. The teachers, students, and tutors that added enjoyed other help. The teachers, students, and tutors. To make my writing help me with English to show I have creative writing skills to the teacher. Getting myself together with reading it's hard but I try my best to read and gain information after reading smarter I gained is great. By writing and showing my work. Deserve the learning "skills" from creative writing class so I work hard at this assignment to send a "message" to receive a grade I learned well this semester and tried to get all of my work done. Enjoyed writing my work for this semester now I know some writing styles exists. One I got my mind together and figure out I need to change the style I'm writing a new one that I needed to have opened. Now I think I may have some of my work great prepared is cool with me but I'll take what I can get times new Roman for this is natural. The new work that I prepared to represent is now helping me with the right created writing I have learned that's the truth. Added myself new ways for my writing to get "attention" people can read anytime my is accepted. Ended up showing my work is to read enjoy. Down with talking about the help learned added extra answers ways writing this semester same styles support opportunity proud done. After reason show writing new ways added. Now when writing it is interesting and noticed. Showed writing is such creative important true understand new writing really answered was showed. Built the true reason able be best. You understand tried my best to help you.
Deontae Dansby
Creative Writing
April, 28, 2021
Artist's Statement
As an Artist I put my effort into my work I have truth, details, reason, and what I'm saying relates. The parts of my stories I write that a person can learn from it's clear, right, and safe when in my stories you learn to see issues. Show all my readers away to get points across, new development, and an artist Statement truth. Some read my stories and it was easy to see the creative writing, art, structure, and the way I wrote about what could be true. As people read my work they can tell like me out of one to ten my work is a ten. Easy to write a paper just like mine in my work I might talk about women and men. Easy to tell I was educated and came from the school where I learned how to write some work people get to notice. The writing I write I like that I had a theme.
Artist statement saying all true reasons reading Deontae's stories is interesting Deontae Dansby biography. Black color race African American age, 34, 1987, 02, good dates and age. Weight is 250 show height 6'3 good Oakland accepted California is state. Names showed Deontae Dansby names skill landscape. School College laney English is subject same means my major.
Deontae Dansby
Creative Writing
May 8, 2021
Feedback Letter
Dear Deontae Dansby from Alma Margado.
Have you started with you craft responses?
That was great what I appreciate about your writing I can picture what your saying I visualize what your saying experiences are very real you describe everything it felt very natural I felt like I was there with like that you had it in order it's like I can see animals. Go work I like that I think the second I like the second better than the first you were more relaxed with the second I like the second one I would love to give feed back you were more comfortable you writing from a place good for you your telling that you go to laney College. So I like it was very descriptive for you like it was a poem. Want it to give you feed back if done you were talking about your roots you were talking about yourself and your nick name so I like it that thank you. Thank you I really enjoyed it's felt like you really met the requirements I how you made Peter, and how he realistic I the character Peter, great work thank you. She from east Africa just her coming up with stuff entertaining my self she build a world to come from like none of this is necessary true. Next time I'll be much more prepared it would be better nice to meet you to by is there a specific time that works for everyone so we can create a zoom meeting for our workshop? Let me know the best times have a great evening.
Thi is the info the meeting today at 3:00pm, please come with the craft responses. Alma Margado's zoom meeting meeting ID: 3437996659.
Sincerely Deontae Dansby.
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