Portfolio

 Deontae Dansby 

Adrienne Oliver 

Creative writing 

May 9, 2021

               Stories are better it's true plus the proof that I become better to be able to make stories up are they made from the truth I like to right going somewhere is what my stories let you know you might find some of the readings interesting it's always somewhere to go for a person to make stories up it feels like being a artist when drawing is the filling of coming up with a adventure for some stories being creative is not that hard but you can with your mind to come up with some wonderful stories for people to read if a person take time to write the stories I make I like that I would share them they will be on adventure to a happy ending for people with names are I involved myself to make it interesting everything I mentioned about myself maybe the truth maybe information to help the new reason why I said what I said I work hard at my work to make it good enough to read you maybe seem are heard before I think make me a good writer to me it's what it prove. The helping

writing is doing I'm writing for a reason to prove through a assignment that so far I have done great this works for me reading and writing will explain my answer I have become good and I like to read and write I will show I do know how this is true. The main reason I'm because I need to improve with writing stories so I write from a theme. The writing is creative it is good now I am learning the process will help me be a better writer I like to write to prove I got better I am writing to be good at school this that writing this will prove. The stories will be a part of a assignment aspect to read stories some writing 

explaining now I want to complete this course but it seems good to read like closer to a writing summary that help a person get to understand I am doing good so far and I believe my writing will improve. That's what I am trying to prove.

                 Stories they helping now when a person reading all my stories I will try to write enough to understand. Reason all able to make sense stories the truth is hard so some is made up I made characters to understand on a adventure to get somewhere are they were at a building in a neighborhood in the community in the city where a lot could happen but I have made stories. In the jungle are they will walk along a path to over river. End up in another city where they will like people they met that help them get there by letting them know how to get there they can get lost but they make it to where started to go they do not turn around to go back home they have they path in the jungle. Anybody wasn't cool with it they had rights. Opportunity to read the writing I created is coming the stories seem short stories reading if it is something to read that make me want to read every other reading from day to night. Meaning is telling explaining stories how I do my stories based on "relationships" how people can make it survival because they will survive with each other in stories I made nothing happen to the characters they all have a destination told happy ending like it was night and they made it to the lights.

               

    Now you can like stories with people being with each other relationship and the people have know problems with the environment living in the community they are in the right area in a workplace with each other the time is the best until it is over. Other people can be around these people and notice they continue to do what they can do in the stories I write will be helping you understand what characters I made a past of the stories are make it to and how they are keeping the way to end to be happy readers read how a happy ending is what my stories prove. Reason was to show how to men are tryna get somewhere it seem like to people saving money is the reason friends will get along with each other working landscape job to save to have strength. Some money make people get along two people going to work is one of my stories. This writing will continue to explain than some stories.

                Do right when I prove my work is right I have my name involved when I make a Artist statement I like what I done. Ended up explaining my information on a assignment you see it is a part of my portfolio you can read my biography is one of my papers with writing explains. Finding the river is my favorite. Going to a new town in a story is great. Happiness is explained when the get to the they will be happy because they was on a long walk through the tree area's to get to they destination a lot could have happened like getting hurt and not having the right healthcare. Interesting stories after you read some of what they could be important to help my skills seem incredible.

                  During the interviews that's a part of the feedback letter I was reading my work it was good to do the writing workshop with someone the experience was a good decision for development. Greatest effort to try to make a portfolio I hope that readers enjoy reading mind I'm grateful. Journey is what one of my stories have to some people on a journey and I think it was good now I'm writing on judgement. Maintaining the good work after I wrote the power of I am I thought of golden gate that brings back memories. Prepared to read other people work again if it will help with work I have provided. Something I learned this semester is creative writing and I tried to help understand specifically.

Deontae Dansby 

Creative writing 

May 5, 2021

                                                                        Response

             In the neighborhood where you can have a home. At a area is where the "messages" is learned at in a community. My effort show somebody again got easy story. The African American males learned each other talk to Jay was Tom money main reason Jay and Tom are really outside. They both work at the same place and work outside they are "responsible" for tools they job has for them to use the job Jay and Tom job they do is called landscape Job they clean up helping the city they both like the truth told. Locations is at where they living "arrangement" is at home where they both work at the landscape Job they want hundreds, thousands, and millions of dollars they both agree to having lots of money around in this community has clean environment these are good people that lives in the city they work in they make lots of money they Jay and Tom both of them are lucky. 

             Messages are learned by Jay and Tom it is about money so they participate to get money they see how to make it to get some money they both enjoy getting money, that's right. Responsible for Jay and Tom is they get to work on time everyday they have to go Jay and Tom stay right next to each other in the same building they both make sure that Job is done and everything is clean right. Arrangement is the reason they both like messages and are responsible like media communication they understand set up to live around each other to go to the same job and they both make sure they keep how they have it in the same building and at the same workplace into the job end.

Deontae  Dansby 

Creative  writing 

May. 5,  2021

                                                               The Adventure 

             This  same  adventure  that  is  the  adventure  Jimmy,  was  to  follow  the  path  to  a  new  city  to  get  to  a  new  place  to  live  his  friends  Joe,  and  Fred,  was  coming  with  him  through  the  woods  up  a  mountain  and  down  a  mountain  to  get  to  where  his  family  lives  in  the  city  next  to  where  he  use  to  live  he  has  to  walk  there  so  he  has  started  to  noticed  how  to  get  there  the  stuff  he  can  run  into  are  animals  he  can  see  is  important  to  this  story.  The  help  people  probably  believe  into  get  to  east  river  the  trees  really  are  big  trees  they  "tall"  trees  they  will  be  everywhere  in  this  "adventure"  is  what  going  through  the  woods  proves.  The  walk  is  a  long  walk  got  to  have  enough  food  supplies  with  enough  drink  people  is  ready  on  this  way  to  get  there  they  would  won't  to  try  not  to  get  surrounded  by  animals  that  will  hurt  them  in  the  woods  where  they  will  not  have  a  doctor  at  to  get  to  for  recovery  they  plan  to  stay  close  to  be  safe  as  possible  every  person  have  their  rights.  Added  a  mask  to  cover  face  they  will  be  around  trees  bugs  are  in  the  woods  a  lot  they  are  wearing  hats  to  cover  they  heads  dress  the  best  they  could  for  this  adventure  they  have  a  lot  to  learn  they  could  have  could  video  tape  the  time  while  on  the  adventure  this  the  only  way  to  walk  there  the  "destination"  is  what  really  is  right  they  could  go  in  the  way  but  the  right  way  walk  is  the  way  they  are  going  so  Jimmy,  Joe,  and  Fred  has  a  way  to  go  to  east  river  this  their  first  adventure.  Across  the  river  is  the  what  they  will  have  to  do  they  are  not  "afraid"  to  cross  into  the  city  that  has  the  destination  the  good  thing  about  them  being  friends  is  that  they  have  nothing  "against"  each  other  they  understand  each  other  "appearance"  they  are  all  ready  for  the  experiences  they  run  into  they  know  it  amazing  that  they  have  all  the  stuff  on  this  path  to  take  to  learn  about  this  way  to  go  to  get  together  with  family  for  "attention"  they  will  get  there  altogether.  In  the  end  they  have  each other  still  alright  as  survivors  they  made  it  was  going  to  be  hard  not  to  ones  they  got  to  the  river  can  see  the  city  from  there  so  it's  a  way  to  from  there  after  they  have  lots  of  bigger  and  better  buildings  they  really  tall  buildings  they  really  wanted  to  get  there  Jimmy,  Joe,  and  Fred  the  whole  time  there  they  wanted  everybody  not  to  have  any  problems  are  any  issues.  

               Tall  trees  big  buildings  all  coming  to  see  on  the  adventure  they  have  the  right  way  to  east river  everytime  now  that's right.  Adventure  is  what  they  got  of  it  Jimmy,  Joe, and  Fred.  Afraid  they  was  not  they  wasn't  scared  at  all  on  the  path  to  get  there  that  was  one  of  the  good  things.  Against  the  woods  they  were  walking  to  they  did  not  stop.  Appearance  was  the  same  after  they  got  there  to  east  river.  Attention  they  got  lots  of  it  when  they  all  there  that's  the  end  of  the  story.

Deontae Dansby 

Creative writing 

April 5, 2021

                                                                     Midterm 

                 My first assignment was good to read after I tried to use my new writing skills. Because I tried my best to use what I can come up with I thought of ways to make it to the next would be created writing but it was a way to become smart to know real way to create writing my self then I came back to revise and put the new kind of writing will be great. My plan is to make the letters than words be times Roman to have some new kind of writing appear is now what using to help with created writing skills. The teachers, students, and tutors that added enjoyed other help. The teachers, students, and tutors. To make my writing help me with English to show I have creative writing skills to the teacher. Getting myself together with reading it's hard but I try my best to read and gain information after reading smarter I gained is great. By writing and showing my work. Deserve the learning "skills" from creative writing class so I work hard at this assignment to send a "message" to receive a grade I learned well this semester and tried to get all of my work done. Enjoyed writing my work for this semester now I know some writing styles exists. One I got my mind together and figure out I need to change the style I'm writing a new one that I needed to have opened. Now I think I may have some of my work great prepared is cool with me but I'll take what I can get times new Roman for this is natural. The new work that I prepared to represent is now helping me with the right created writing I have learned that's the truth. Added myself new ways for my writing to get "attention" people can read anytime my is accepted. Ended up showing my work is to read enjoy. Down with talking about the help learned added extra answers ways writing this semester same styles support opportunity proud done. After reason show writing new ways added. Now when writing it is interesting and noticed. Showed writing is such creative important true understand new writing really answered was showed. Built the true reason able be best. You understand tried my best to help you.

Deontae Dansby 

Creative Writing 

April, 28, 2021

                                                      Artist's Statement

            As an Artist I put my effort into my work I have truth, details, reason, and what I'm saying relates. The parts of my stories I write that a person can learn from it's clear, right, and safe when in my stories you learn to see issues. Show all my readers away to get points across, new development, and an artist Statement truth. Some read my stories and it was easy to see the creative writing, art, structure, and the way I wrote about what could be true. As people read my work they can tell like me out of one to ten my work is a ten. Easy to write a paper just like mine in my work I might talk about women and men. Easy to tell I was educated and came from the school where I learned how to write some work people get to notice. The writing I write I like that I had a theme. 

            Artist statement saying all true reasons reading Deontae's stories is interesting Deontae Dansby biography. Black color race African American age, 34, 1987, 02, good dates and age. Weight is 250 show height 6'3 good Oakland accepted California is state. Names showed Deontae Dansby names skill landscape. School College laney English is subject same means my major.

Deontae Dansby 

Creative Writing 

May 8, 2021

                                                                 Feedback Letter

               Dear Deontae Dansby from Alma Margado.

        Have you started with you craft responses?

                  That was great what I appreciate about your writing I can picture what your saying I visualize what your saying experiences are very real you describe everything it felt very natural I felt like I was there with like that you had it in order it's like I can see animals. Go work I like that I think the second I like the second better than the first you were more relaxed with the second I like the second one I would love to give feed back you were more comfortable you writing from a place good for you your telling that you go to laney College. So I like it was very descriptive for you like it was a poem. Want it to give you feed back if done you were talking about your roots you were talking about yourself and your nick name so I like it that thank you. Thank you I really enjoyed it's felt like you really met the requirements I how you made Peter, and how he realistic I the character Peter, great work thank you. She from east Africa just her coming up with stuff entertaining my self she build a world to come from like none of this is necessary true. Next time I'll be much more prepared it would be better nice to meet you to by is there a specific time that works for everyone so we can create a zoom meeting for our workshop? Let me know the best times have a great evening. 

                Thi is the info the meeting today at 3:00pm, please come with the craft responses. Alma Margado's zoom meeting meeting ID: 3437996659.

              Sincerely Deontae Dansby.